1. The arguement that I am trying to make is that there is a process to revision and how I personally revise my own essay's while compairing it to the text Revision Stratigies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers by Nancy Sommers.
2. So far I have used the text by summerizing it and comparing my own experiences. I have one quote, but need more.
3. I have organized my draft so far by introducing the articale and the idea of revision. Next I talk about my experience of being a student writer. Then I talk about what methods I have learned and where. Next I give a another example of my learning process for revision.
4. So far I feel like my draft is a little unorganized. It needs a stronger thesis statment and more qoutes. I can't think of one sentence that stands out to right now, but I'm sure there is one.
5. I would like feed back on the organization of my paper. I am struggling with time needed to write this paper.
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